Generally I think it works, so now I will move on to the addition of the detail on the goose, the movement of its wings and neck, and also add in some secondary and follow-through animation showing the woman's dress. That post will be entitled All the Bells and Whistles. But it will take me some time to prepare (I really am doing this stuff between postings) and I am about to start a contract job doing animation for a new video game. Therefore my next post will be a top 10 list of books I consider essential for the 2D animator, which ought to be of interest to cgi animators as well.
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